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专栏作者:唐伟胜

新航道特约雅思学术参谋

广东外语外贸大学教授、博士

我国闻名英语教育专家

《9分达人雅思写作真题复原及解析3》作者

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2019年10月10日

雅思大作文标题

怎么处理青少年违法上升问题?

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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. Do you agree or disagree?

解析&审题

千呼万唤,违法类论题总算重出江湖!

违法类论题是雅思写作的常客,每年均呈现3-4次,内容触及违法的原因,赏罚办法及赏罚的作用,怎么避免违法等,因这类论题许多学生平常考虑得比较少,因而不行不屑一顾。纵观近几年雅思写作,老雅将最常呈现的违法类体裁概括为如下几类:

1. 青少年违法,包含:(1)青少年违法的原因及其处理办法;(2)青少年违法是否应该与成年人违法相同得到赏罚;(3)青少年违法后是否该收监,或许有其他的赏罚方式?

2. 一般违法的原因,包含:(1)人们违法的原因是什么?(2)违法是环境使然仍是天分使然?

3. 一般违法的处理办法,包含:(1)违法能否避免?(2)避免违法,最好的办法是将监犯收监仍是对人们施行教育?(3)是否应该操控电影和电视里的暴力镜头?

4. 其他,比方:出狱后的监犯能否成为教育青少年避免违法的模范?

本题触及年青人违法的处理办法。与一般标题不同的是,本题提出了一个处理办法,即“进步爸爸妈妈的教育技巧”,并提出这是处理年青人违法的“仅有办法”。

唐教师现已屡次论说过,对这种“仅有办法”或“最佳办法”的标题,一般的思路是首要供认这种办法是有用的,然后提出还有其他(更好的)办法。就本题而言,咱们能够先供认,进步爸爸妈妈教育孩子的技巧确实能够避免孩子违法,但这不是仅有的办法,校园和政府也应该为削减孩子违法担任。

以下是唐教师编撰的高分范文。

教师笔记

01

Oneworrying trendglobally is that the number of young offenders ison the rise. To combatthis, many suggest that parents should be taught better parenting skills. While the improvement of parenting skills will certainly helpbring downthecrime rateof young law-breakers, it is not the only solution to the problem.

全球一个令人担忧的趋势是,年青罪犯的人数正在添加。为了打败这个问题,许多人主张应该教会爸爸妈妈更好的孩子教育技巧。进步孩子教育技巧当然有助于下降青少年违法者的违法率,但这并不是这一问题的仅有处理办法。

解析

(1) 本段开宗明义给出布景(青少年违法在添加),并清晰提出自己的观念(进步爸爸妈妈教育孩子的技巧有助于处理这个问题,但不是仅有办法)。

(2) A worrying trend 一个令人担忧的趋势

(3) On the rise 在上升

(4) Combat 打败;打败

(5) Bring down 下降

(6) Crime rate 违法率

02

We all know that parentsare largely to blame formany crimes their childrencommit, which could have been prevented with better parenting skills. Many parents, for instance, do not know how to listen, so their children have nobody to turn to for help when they encounter problems in their life, thus making them easy targets of bad influences outside. Once their children do anything wrong, these parents will thenresort tophysical punishment rather than spending time talking to their children. The poor parenting skills, indeed, may leave childrenvulnerable tobad behaviour, which mayeventuallylead toantisocialcrimes.

咱们都知道,爸爸妈妈在很大程度上要为他们的孩子犯下的许多罪过担任,如果有更好的孩子教育技巧,这些罪过原本能够防备的。例如,许多家长都不知道怎样倾听,因而,当他们的孩子在生活中遇到问题时,都没有人能够求助,因而很简单成为外界不良影响的方针。一旦他们的孩子做错了什么,这些爸爸妈妈就会诉诸于体罚,而不是花时刻和孩子攀谈。实际上,糟糕的孩子教育技巧或许会使孩子们简单遭到不良行为的影响,而这或许会导致反社会的违法。

解析

(1) 本段评论没有教育孩子的办法,孩子有或许走上违法路途。

(2) Somebody is to blame for... 或人应该为......担任(遭到责怪)

(3) Commit a crime 违法

(4) Resort to 运用;付诸

(5) Be vulnerable to... 简单遭到......(影响或损伤)的

(6) Eventually 终究

(7) Anti-social 反社会

03

The improved parenting skills will certainly be helpful, but in order to control the tide ofjuvenile delinquency, we need to do more. In the first place, schools should shoulder their share of responsibility. Besidesimparting knowledge, schools ought to improve their students' ethicaland legal awareness by showing them how totell right from wrong. Many schools, for example, pay much attention to the artistic education of their studentsfor the reason thatart can help a child become a better person. What is more, the government should play an active role in educating the future generation. Onerecommendablepolicy the government has made recently is to ban the entry of young people under 15 to the bars and the Internet cafe. This policy makes it possible for children to spend more time with their parents and teachers, thus reducing thelikelihoodof theirmisconducts.

进步为人爸爸妈妈的技巧固然有协助,但为了操控青少年违法的趋势,咱们需要做更多的作业。首要,校园应该承担起自己的职责。除了教授常识外,校园还应向学生展现怎么辨别是非,然后进步他们的品德和法律认识。例如,许多校园都非常重视对学生的艺术教育,由于艺术能够协助孩子成为一个更好的人。更重要的是,政府应该在教育未来一代方面发挥积极作用。政府最近拟定的一项方针值得引荐,即制止15岁以下的年青人进入酒吧和网吧。这项方针使孩子们有或许花更多的时刻与爸爸妈妈和教师在一起,然后削减他们行为不端的或许性。

解析

(1) 本段评论校园和政府在处理青少年违法方面能够做的工作(校园应该教孩子怎么辨明是非,政府应该营建更好的社会气氛)。

(2) Juvenile delinquency 青少年违法

(3) Imparting knowledge 教授常识

(4) Ethical awareness 品德认识

(5) Tell right from wrong 分辨是非

(6) For the reason that... 由于......

(7) Recommendable 值得引荐的

(8) Likelihood 或许性

(9) Misconduct 不端行为

04

In conclusion, to prevent young children from committing crimes, the parents, schools, and the government should join together and createa favorable environmentfor the growth of children.

总归,为了避免孩子违法,家长、校园和政府应该联合起来,为儿童的生长发明有利的环境。

解析

(1) 本段是定论段,再次清晰自己的观念。

(2) A favourable environment 一个有利的环境

向上滑动阅读

7分范文

One worrying trend globally is that the number of young offenders is on the rise. To combat this, many suggest that parents should be taught better parenting skills. While the improvement of parenting skills will certainly help bring down the crime rate of young law-breakers, it is not the only solution to the problem.

We all know that parents are largely to blame for many crimes their children commit, which could have been prevented with better parenting skills. Many parents, for instance, do not know how to极彩娱乐登录平台-10月10日雅思大作文真题参阅范文 | 青少年犯罪率上升,究竟该咋办? listen, so their children have nobody to turn to for help when they encounter problems in their life, thus making them easy targets of bad influences outside. Once their children do anything wrong, these parents will then resort to physical punishment rather than spending time talking to their children. The p极彩娱乐登录平台-10月10日雅思大作文真题参阅范文 | 青少年犯罪率上升,究竟该咋办?oor parenting skills, indeed, may leave children vulnerable to bad behaviour, which may eventually lead to antisocial crimes.

The improved parenting skills will certainly be helpful, but in order to stem the tide of juvenile delinquency, we need to do more. In the first place, schools should shoulder their share of responsibility. Besides imparting knowledge, schools ought to improve their students’ ethical and legal awareness by showing them how to tell right from wrong. Many schools, for example, pay much attention to the artistic education of their students for the reason that art can help a child become a better person. What is mo极彩娱乐登录平台-10月10日雅思大作文真题参阅范文 | 青少年犯罪率上升,究竟该咋办?re, the government should play an active role in educating the future generation. One recommendable policy the government has made recently is to ban the entry of young people under 15 to the bars and the Internet cafe. This policy makes it possible for children to spend more time with their parents and teachers, thus reducing the likelihood of their misconducts.

In conclusion, to prevent young children from committing crimes, parents, schools, and the government should join together and create a favorable environment for the growth of children.

(329 words)

主张背诵的语句

1. While the improvement of parenting skills will certainly helpbring downthecrime rateof young law-breakers, it is not the only solution to the problem.

进步孩子教育技巧当然有助于下降青少年违法者的违法率,但这并不是这一问题的仅有处理办法。

2. We all know that parentsare largely to blame formany crimes their childrencommit, which could have been prevented with better parenting skills.

咱们都知道,爸爸妈妈在很大程度上要为他们的孩子犯下的许多罪过担任,如果有更好的孩子教育技巧,这些罪过原本能够防备的。

3. Many parents, for instance, do not know how to listen, so their children have nobody to turn to for help when they encounter problems in their life, thus making them easy targets of bad influences outside.

例如,许多家长都不知道怎样倾听,因而,当他们的孩子在生活中遇到问题时,都没有人能够求助,因而很简单成为外界不良影响的方针。

4. Besidesimparting knowledge, schools ought to improve their students' ethicaland legal awareness by showing them how totell right from wrong.

除了教授常识外,校园还应向学生展现怎么辨别是非,然后进步他们的品德和法律认识。

5. In conclusion, to prevent young children from committing crimes, the parents, schools, and the government should join together and createa favorable environmentfor the growth of children.

总归,为了避免孩子违法,家长、校园和政府应该联合起来,为儿童的生长发明有利的环境。

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